so great effort etc......
movement sequences were all very jerky and not smooth, especially the walk sequence, lots of proportions looked off and not in a stylistic manner, very unclear as to what exactly was going on, the character designs could have been a little more uniqe looking, and the end words seemed to relate more accurately to a differently themed piece than this one, something from disinformation or what not
but....great effort and clearly a lot of work put into it
awww, thank you
great black and white, motion, etc.
I'd have to say though, my favorite was your work with the expressions, perfect emoting without being too extreme
beautiful, hope to see more soon
oh and what was in the box?
I use mac and my roommates use pcs.....which creates hours of hilarious schtick of course. so thank you....thank you.
oh, and great mouth movement, very expressive and well synced.
the graphics were clean and well done, the larry's walk cycle was nice and exaggerated, fitting to the character
the scenery was clean etc, though maybe lacking in variety a bit
the voice acting was asking
It came through very smooth and was easy too understand, but very lacking in emoting
it seems that even in purposefuly bland character voices, which seems to be an aspect of larry, there's a little more sazz
and some of the comedic timing seemed off as well, maybe staying a bit too long on the donkey
however, it was very cute and enjoyable otherwise
Thanks for the review. We're improving most of that in our second episode. Im glad you acknowledged the positive aspects of this production unlike most other people reviewing it. - So thanks!
This is wonderfully animated, pacing, timing, great voice acting, etc.
but maybe a little too derivative of venture bros......?
fantastic, sardonic, and even with a wonderful singing voice
clean lines and good comedic timing
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